Willow, the Wonderdog, aka the Wrath of Lizards
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Today is a dash-about day, so here’s something quick before I dash to the woods with my patient, long-suffering dog. Yes, Willow, I love you more than poetry. You know why? Because despite what they say about dogs and prose, you ARE poetry.
Today’s prompt challenges us to write a self-portrait poem in which we make a specific action a metaphor for our life.
PS–Most of the poems written this April will remain online for up to five days, after which they will be replaced by an excerpt, an erasure, or a thoroughly amateurish art piece that will only allow for bits of the original poem to peek through. At least, this is the plan. The reason being that, at some point, in the hopefully not too distant future, these drafts will undergo revision and begin their multiple-year pilgrimage through the slush piles of many a literary journal. So help me, O Muse.
PPS–Since five days have already passed, the original poem has been replaced by an erasure. No trees have been harmed in the process. The fully cooperating pine cones will be promptly released back into the wild.
Poetry from the trenches, Day 1
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Thanks for following me! I enjoyed reading through your posts. I’ll be back for more.
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Looking forward to reading your work!
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Right you are. We have the leash and they are walking us. But you see – in this evolution game, dog owners will rise above. We get more exercise.
Thank you for the warning too. I often like to lag behind. Will be prompt.
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I agree. Without Willow’s calming, encouraging presence, I’d find plenty of excuses not to leave my house.
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as a fellow dog owner, this transported me right away. “[quote deleted by RI]” is just beautiful, as is your dog. greetings from berlin, anja (twitter @missyerem)
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Thank you so much, Anja–I’m glad you liked it.🙏💜
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Kinda like poetry writing, huh? I never know if I’m creating it — or if it’s creating me: “[quote deleted by RI]”
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Love the analogy! It reminds me of Lao Tzu’s butterfly dream: https://www.learnreligions.com/butterflies-great-sages-and-valid-cognition-3182587
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Lovely to read you again.
And delicious invisible prayers…
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Yes! Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Since we can’t meet up – enjoying this at least (this was my comment but I don’t understand some of the website stuff)
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Hi Saffron!! So glad to see you here.🥰 Don’t worry, we’ll be back at Pernessy in no time. In the meantime, I’m giving you a virtual hug.💜
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Superb! So much depth and truth…sometimes ou have the leash sometimes you don’t…..it says all!
Very well written.
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Glad you liked it–thank you for reading and commenting!
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Fantastic!!
Yay, we’re NaPoWriMo-ing again
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🎉👏🎈💜
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