Gas giant WASP 76b
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Today’s prompt encourages us to write a poem based on a news article. I chose one of the suggested articles: “Researchers Discover Faraway Planet Where the Rain is Made of Iron.” Despite the stark beauty of gas giant WASP 76b and its fascinating molten-iron rain, the resulting poem is a small token of gratitude for this planet we live on.
*Update: So grateful and excited to be the featured participant of Day 8 on NaPoWriMo. Thank you to Maureen Thorson for the honor!
Poetry from the trenches, Day 7
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How lucky we are
not to be
tidally locked to our star.
How lucky to have
a sunrise, a sunset.
Whatever grief
we carry from morning till night,
how lucky we are
that the moon
will hold it for us while we sleep.
How lucky to have
sturdy ground under our feet
& not a scorching abyss
that sucks us in, spits us out
as vapor. How lucky
that no 11,000 mph winds
will sweep us off into space.
The rain that falls
on our heads–how lucky we are
it’s still water & not
molten iron.
How lucky we are we can breathe.
Yes. How lucky we are
we can breathe.
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Yes. A good reminder, when we feel overwhelmed with too much bad news. Thank you.
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Something to be grateful for indeed!
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Absolutely–and take action before it’s too late!💜
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Love this! I also used this story for my poem and I love that we’ve told either side of the story. https://donnamday.com/glopowrimo-2020-day-7/
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Fascinating world–but I’m so glad we don’t live there!
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Woww mama I love it !!! Good job 🙂 <333
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Thank you, Daruta mamei!🥰😘💜
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The rain that falls
on our heads–how lucky we are
it’s still water & not
molten iron.
I intend to get soaked in the rain next time!
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Oh, I love being rained on! Wonderful intention.💜
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Congratulations! Well deserved mention.
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Thank you, Bee—much appreciated!💜
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Congratulations!
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Thank you!
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Featured Participant! You are so well-deserved of this honor and this poem, especially, is incredible. These lines, “How lucky we are we can breathe./Yes. How lucky we are / we can breathe.”
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Thank you so much for your kind words, MaxieJane!🥰🙏 I’m so happy this poem spoke to you.💜
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Congratulations on being the featured poet today.
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Thank you so much, Brindha!
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Congratulations on being the featured poet today.
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Thank you!
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Congratulations! Yes, how lucky we are to breathe–at least for now!
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Thank you so much! Counting my blessings–every day.🙏💜
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Beautiful, Romana! How blessed I am to know you on this planet! Congratulations on writing the featured poem!
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Thank you, dear Martina! I feel the same way—blessed for Pernessy, and good friends, and poetry!🥰🙏💜
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What a beautiful poem Romana! Congratulations on the feature, so well deserved.
We are indeed lucky and we need to treat our planet with appreciation lest our luck changes. 💕
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Thank you, dear Saffron!🥰 And I wholeheartedly agree—we live on borrowed time now.🙏💜
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So beautiful, honest and heartfelt. An amazing poem, surioara! Thank you so much for birthing this comforting poem child. How luck we are to breathe in your poetry! “How lucky we are we can breathe./Yes. How lucky we are/we can breathe.” You inspire me! Much love and gratitude, always ❤️🐝🙏
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And you know how grateful I am for your constant, unwavering support of my work–even when I felt most despondent about it–and especially at those times! 🙏💜What a wonderful, comforting miracle is sisterhood.🥰💜
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Speechless. Romana! Genius.
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Awww, Liz–thank you so much! Loved your joyful text message this morning!😍🥰💜
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Yes our rain still cleanses, that is luck indeed. (K)
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Who knows what our rains might look like in two hundred years–especially if we continue to do nothing to stop a climate disaster. But for now, every time it rains, it feels like a blessing.
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My brother was worked for the Maryland EPA back in the 80s and I remember him testifying before Congress then about acid rain. So much time has passed, so little accomplished to stop what we have done. It’s definitely accumulating.
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No doubt about it… Sigh. Heartbreaking.
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I really love this. It’s profoundly beautiful and it echoes a sentiment I hadn’t known I had.
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Thank you so much, Anni–I’m glad it strikes a chord with you!
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Quite. We are lucky. Beautiful.
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Thank you, Manja!🙏💜 Iron rain certainly puts things in perspective, doesn’t it?
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I’d say, especially if it’s falling on your head. 😀 Congratulations on being featured! Great choice.
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Thank you, Manja–much appreciated!🙏💜
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I enjoyed the contrast between the beginning and ending of the poem. Nicely done. Looks like we were looking at similar articles, but focused on different ones. 😉
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Thank you, Maria. Just read your poem–I’m still seething… I think the only way to get rid of tyrants is by laughing at them (Colbert might have said that).
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I love this image:
Whatever grief
we carry from morning till night,
how lucky we are
that the moon
will hold it for us while we sleep.
And I am indeed thankful we can still breathe. ❤
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Oh, me too! I don’t know for how long, but we’re here for now.
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