Image from Lars von Trier’s film
Breaking the Waves (1996)
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Today’s prompt challenges us to “write a triolet. These eight-line poems involve repeating lines and a tight rhyme scheme. The repetitions and rhymes can lend themselves to humorous poems, as well as to poems expressing dramatic or sorrowful moods. And sometimes the repetitions can be used in deceptive ways, by splitting the words in a given line into different sentences, and making subtle changes, as in this powerful triolet by Sandra McPherson.” ~ NaPoWriMo, Day 12
It’s Easter morning and it looks like another glorious spring day ahead. So much joy in the world, so much sadness. Like yesterday’s poem, my first triolet attempts to unpack some of the complicated and contradictory feelings I’ve been having lately.
Poetry from the trenches, Day 12
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Easter Morning
The bells are tolling in the sky.
The sky’s awash with song and light.
Spring quells my sorrow. Limpid cry,
The bells are tolling in the sky.
I’ve learned to live the questions. Why
Does Rilke have to be so right?
The bells are tolling in the sky.
The sky’s awash with song and light.
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Breaking the Waves is one of my favourite films ever. Your triolet is peaceful. Happy Pasqua, as Italians say.
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Happy Pasqua to you too, dear Manja! Thanks for the kind words.🥰 (The film is one of my favorites as well.)
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Seriously? Even a triolet? A girl could get a little jealous… 😉
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Happy Easter, dear Liz!🥰 It’s not that good… I don’t think l’ll be writing any more triolets–but am glad I tried this form.
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Happy Easter, Romana! I feel like I’ve been stuck on a tongue twister all day — my poem, not yours.
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Tomorrow will come with new gifts.💜
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Not sure I want to open mine, after today 😉
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I think even painful experiences can be the seed of something better in the future. You never know what will feed your imagination.
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I love the way you broke your sentence before asking the (excellent) question about why Rilke has to be right….
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Thank you, Max–much appreciated!
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