Photo by Philip Weaver, Birmingham, 1964
Today’s prompt challenges us “to write a poem about a very large thing. It could be a mountain or a blue whale or a skyscraper or a planet or the various contenders for the honor of being the Biggest Ball of Twine. Whatever giant thing you choose, I hope this chance to versify in praise of the huge gets your poetic engines humming.” (Full NaPoWriMo post available here.)
I chose to turn an abstract concept into a concrete place and try to find my way around in it.
PS–The posted draft has expired, but here are some photos of Tübingen, taken this April (2022).
How kind of you to replace certain poems with your photos and videos from Prague, Romana. 🙂 It is like travelling by your side. The first photo in this gallery looks not unlike my Ljubljana.
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It was my pleasure! I ran out of time to replace them with art pieces, but I tend to take way too many photos wherever I go, so that was my way out of this pickle. I would love to see Ljubljana one day. Working on staying healthy so I have more time for all these dream cities.💜🍃
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Romana: you are the witch of the paradox, which
is the cauldron of creativity.
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Thank you, Jo C! Here I am, stirring a cauldron of suspicious-looking odds and ends in the hope of a good meal.🥰
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“Silent as a grave” comes to mind here, but somehow it is not scary. This is the kind of silence I crave too and, yes, you have to work hard and be fearless to get to that place.
A beautiful poem.
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Thank you so much, Natasa! I don’t find graveyards scary at all–peaceful, maybe. And yes, this kind of silence requires ultimate focus.🍃
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Most might be frightened by the silent. I invite it at inopportune moments…. Like this.
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I do too!🍃
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This is a stunning poem!!!
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Thank you!🙏🍃
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That’s a hard place to find sometimes; you’ve captured it well. (K)
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Thank you, K.!🙏🍃
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I love your creative take. I have never actively meditated, but reading your poem, this line [quote removed by RI] teaches me what meditation is.
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Thank you so much, Gloria! I think there are different ways to practice meditation and centering ourselves through language is one of them.💜🍃
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You found a good silence and a good life. ❤
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Thanks, Manja!🙏💜 Both life and silence are works-in-progress. This is more of a wishful situation. I ‘m afraid I very much need praise and people and well, not to be silent…
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You say in a reply to a comment:
“I think there are different ways to practice meditation and centering ourselves through language is one of them.💜🍃”
I could not agree more!
Poetry, too, is a way of centering ourselves through language.
Your poems, unfailingly, act on me in that way.
Your last lines
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open a wound,
hold up a healing balm.
Thank you, Romana, for writing with such a sweet dagger.
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Thank YOU, Jo C, for being such a wonderful reader!💜🍃
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A great twist on the prompt! Well done.
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Thank you!
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Tremendous. And in this silence everyone will adhere to the the unspoken rule: speak only if it improves on the silence.
I love your creative prowess. Adore it really. Thanks for going this deep. I’m in awe of you. Thanks so much. Tremendous 👏 💜 👏
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Thank you for your kind words, dear Selma!🙏 I love that unspoken rule.🥰
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