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Today’s prompt asks us to “write a poem about a very small thing. Whether it’s an atom, a button, a hummingbird’s egg, dollhouse furniture, or the mythical world’s smallest violin, I hope you enjoy your poetic adventures into the microscopic.” (Full NaPoWriMo post available here.)
Like yesterday, I picked an abstract concept and tried to make it concrete. This quote from Jorge Luis Borges served as inspiration: “A book is a set of dead symbols. And then, the right reader comes along and the words—or rather the poetry behind the words—spring into life and we have a resurrection of the word.” A few years back, I wrote another poem during NaPoWriMo 2018 (based on this prompt) that owes its existence to the same quote. The image of the resurrection of the word will keep haunting me as long as I live.
The World’s Smallest Joy
You’ve arrived at an old truth today: read
and you shall be given. Knock
on the door of a book and it will open.
This tends to happen at inopportune times.
On the bus. In a dentist’s office.
In a park somewhere in a foreign city.
You read dormant words
and they awaken inside you, like Lazarus
raised from the dead.
Lo and behold, you’re alive,
kept upright by a book’s spinal column.
Lo and behold, it’s become dangerous
to operate the heavy machinery
of your body.
Forget your next stop. Deal
with your toothache one more day.
Wait in the park until
the familiar moon comes to claim you.
Leave the body alone— it’s only high on words.
Let it sleep off euphoria,
which erupts out of nowhere
and is certain to go the way of all flames.
If you must extinguish it early, try grief.
Any kind or quantity will do.
Simply pour it over the embers and listen
for that amphibian hiss.
It’s the world’s smallest joy,
jumping from one smoldering log
to another, its diligent tail
sweeping away any trace of its passage.
Yours for a moment, then gone. You don’t know
what you did to deserve it,
but its absence surely makes sense.
When—despite your best efforts—joy
means to stay, back off slowly.
Try to appear smaller than joy, larger
than fear.
Try to blend in with the universe, which is made
of endless blades of grass.
Venomous joy adores the juicy green.
If it mistakes you for grass, I’m afraid it’s too late.
Relinquish your grief, for once. Let joy
sink its teeth in.
I’m just catching up with the poems in NaPoWriMo now, and, Romana, your poem is gently stunning in so many ways. It describes the essence of actually writing a poem (I love the “amphibian hiss”). The way you create images that weave a kind of abstract tapestry while being concrete and vivid at the same time, is a rare gift. Thank you!
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Thank you so much, dear Jane—this really made my day! Grateful for readers like you.💜🙏🍃
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Loved your poem. It reminds me of those fleeting moments when a phrase appears unexpectedly and needs to be written before it disappears. Congratulations on being featured…Well deserved.
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Thank you so much, Wendie!🙏💜🍃
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Juicy-fresh and fanged take on joy! Congratulations on the feature! ❤
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Thank you so much, Alana!💜🙏🍃
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I found your poem utterly delightful.
““Lo and behold, you’re alive,
kept upright by a book’s spinal column.” – great lines.
I look forward to giving this poem to my book group.
Thanks for sharing your words.
Ali
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Thank you so much, Ali! I’m touched that you found the poem compelling enough to share it with your book group. Much appreciated💜🍃
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Romana Iorga,
Your writing is dangerous, Romana,
Turns thoughts into flesh and feeling,
Concepts – lack of persistence – into the tail of a salamander,
Reading stanza after stanza, means jumping from one smoldering log to another,
A blade of grass, strung between the fingertips of your words, is compelled to sing,
Low and behold, I’m alive, stretched, resurrected by your poem’s spinal cord.
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Oh Jo C, thank you from the bottom of my heart. I’m so happy this poem speaks to you. I’ll take a modicum of danger as a good thing.🥰🍃
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Absolutely amazing!!! Especially:
“Lo and behold, you’re alive,
kept upright by a book’s spinal column.
Lo and behold, it’s become dangerous
to operate the heavy machinery
of your body. ”
What striking metaphors!
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Thank you, Jenna–much appreciated!💜🍃
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Btw this fits today’s prompt as well and congratulations for the feature.
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Thank you!!🥰
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Hi Romana. Your poetry is fantastic. Superb. I don’t know how I missed it all these days. I will be back to read all your poems. Best wishes.
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Thank you, Sonia–much appreciated! I’m looking forward to reading your poems too.🙏💜🍃
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Stunning poem. So many good lines. My favourites:
“You read dormant words
and they awaken inside you, like Lazarus
raised from the dead.”
“Simply pour it over the embers and listen
for that amphibian hiss.”
And the whole of this ending:
“Try to appear smaller than joy, larger
than fear.
Try to blend in with the universe, which is made
of endless blades of grass.
Venomous joy adores the juicy green.
If it mistakes you for grass, I’m afraid it’s too late.
Relinquish your grief, for once. Let joy
sink its teeth in.”
Fantastic work, well done! 🙂
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I’m so glad you liked it, Sunra. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!🙏💜🍃
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Hurrah, Romana, for being featured, but you feature high among my favourites every day. I love your style! My favourite line is “kept upright by a book’s spinal column.” This is exactly how it goes. Thank you.
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I love your style too, dear Manja! Thanks so much for your unmatched kindness. And yes, I’m mostly made of books now. There are a few other things that prop me up, but books are essential.💜📚🙏
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Woooooooooot! Woot! Woot! WOOT! (Need I say more?)
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Aww Liz, what can I say in response? This is Pernessy serendipity in action.🙏😘🍃
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This is mastery in poetry eloquence. Yours are zen words, dear Romana.
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Thank you, dear Gloria–you’re very kind!💜🙏🍃
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Two joys for me today:
1. Reading this ‘unfolding’ — the ‘knocking’ is still reverberating inside.
2. To be featured alongside you Romana–Ah! the Joy that brings me–BIG!
Congratulations! You know I’ve become a fan of your poetry.
Visiting from: https://artismoments.blogspot.com/
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Thank you so much, Arti–congratulations to you too! I’m so glad you like the piece. I left a comment on your website as well. Happy writing!💜🍃
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The idea of joy being venomous, sinking its teeth in, is as unsettling as that of the attraction of grieving here. Brain-stirring!
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Thank you, Chris! I’m so glad this piece stirred and unsettled–it’s always a good sign (for me)!🍃
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Absolutely delightful and so true- you never know when joy creeps up. Loved every word of it, Romana. Congratulations on being featured. This poem totally deserves it.
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Thank you so much for the kind words, Smitha! Sometimes it’s hard to recognize joy for what it is–or difficult to accept it. It has something to do with how we see ourselves. Like joy, we’re work-in-progress!💜🍃
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Congratulations! Well-deserved.
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you!
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Excuse the spelling mistakes
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No worries!
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A poems of marvel after marvel. I reveled in each morsel. I’m afraid I shall have to read it more than once to savoir each small joy!
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Thank you, Barbara!🙏💜🍃
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Moments to be cherished in the general chomping of the absence of happiness.
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So true🍃
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Yes, yes, I will. xoxo
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Yes. (K)
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This is so meta! Loved it!!
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Thank you!🍃
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