Spring snow (April 1, Pully, Switzerland)
Slowly coming out of hibernation, but will try to catch up with the missed prompts throughout the month. Today’s prompt challenges us “to write a poem . . . in the form of a poetry prompt. If that sounds silly, well, maybe it is! But it’s not without precedent. The poet Mathias Svalina has been writing surrealist prompt-poems for quite a while, posting them to Instagram. You can find examples here, and here, and here.” (Full NaPoWriMo post available here.)
I remember writing a similar piece in 2018 in anticipation of a month filled with poetry. Here it is. I love its mood and its hope. And here’s a darker take on today’s prompt, possibly influenced by the carnage wrecked upon the world by a power-hungry tyrant. It’s hard to find that earlier self in what I just wrote. I borrowed Mathias Svalina’s closing line.
Interrogation Techniques
- First you take the meaning out of a word
- by shaking it vigorously
- until it begins to foam at the mouth.
- Hold the sieve of your head gently by the ears
- so the foam spreads
- evenly over the desert of thought.
- One word can go a long way
- to raising out of nothing a shimmering oasis
- with a caravan picking its way through the dunes
- toward it or, in your case, toward
- a prison fortress. Commandeer your worst
- fears as desert prison guards.
- Promise them your firstborn
- word. Pay them nothing. Hunger
- will only make them more vicious.
- Keep the word off balance at all times.
- Booze helps, but have you tried hobbling
- yourself? Hurling your body
- repeatedly against a cliché? Playing loud
- regrets for 72 hours straight
- while propping your eyes open with toothpicks?
- Initiate friendly interrogation
- when the word is sleep-deprived.
- One way to do it is by chewing
- on its fingernails all the way down
- to the wrist. If your prisoner is manacled,
- you may want to keep the hand
- whole. Chew down
- to the first knuckle instead.
- Be forceful and direct. Don’t beat
- around the bush. Words are terrified
- of precision. It helps to have an array of truth-
- extracting instruments at the ready.
- Bone saws and pliers and drills. Watch
- for the blanched-face syndrome–you’re close
- to a false confession. Listen
- and disbelieve. Wait for the first wave
- of sickness to pass.
- The second. The third.
- In that stink-filled room, when you ask
- for the word’s name
- and it cannot speak,
- silence
- is the poem.
Gutsy fling into gully-filled gutter…
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Thank you, Jo C!🙏💜
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Bang on all the way to the finishing line
Lovely to be reading your words once more.
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Thank you, dear Barbara!💜
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Ohh, wow! Welcome to April poems, Romana. I see you’re well rested. 🙂
I read your 2018 poem just now, after this one. Isn’t it amazing what time and events have done to us all? Where is this cheerfulness from your last line in the old poem? It’s so beautiful that it almost makes me cry.
And this one… where before poems were made, now there is silence that is the poem… Still, so good to read you again.
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Thank you, dear Manja—for these kind words and for sharing my earlier piece widely. I’ve been trying to find my youthful cheerfulness—not that I’ve ever been overly cheerful, but I’m inevitably affected by what’s going on in the world. I keep telling myself and others that for everything there’s a season and joy may yet find us when we expect it the least.
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This is a fine thought. It’s the best kind of joy too, the unexpected. Happy April and beyond!
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Wow!! this is a powerhouse! Like an entire Netflix series squeezed out–it’s essence spread on a page. I’m in awe!
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Oh cool! So happy it kept you entertained!
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Spectacular! So good to see you back.
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Thank you, Alana!
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Good gracious, do you see how naive I am? To be overcome at your Number Two when there was so much more to be had? Well, you got me good. And I loved it. Spectacular. Such dynamite. Thanks for making me roll tonight. You rock and I bless you. Good night. xoxo
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Oh I’m so glad it made you laugh! Happy writing!
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I gotta tell you already. I started to read. And at step two I had to stop !!!! Gosh you made me laugh with verve like a mad woman at Two. Husband came to see if I was ok. Gosh you’re funny. Thank you.
That’s all I can say. Gotta go read the other FORTY TWO other steps. 🤣
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This was phenomenal! 18-20 had me laughing but those last five lines were my favorite.
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Thank you so much, Katie—I’m glad this struck a chord!🙏🍃
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