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Today’s prompt “ was first suggested to us by long-time Na/GloPoWriMo participant Vince Gotera. It’s the hay(na)ku). Created by the poet Eileen Tabios and named by Vince, the hay(na)ku is a variant on the haiku. A hay(na)ku consists of a three-line stanza, where the first line has one word, the second line has two words, and the third line has three words. You can write just one, or chain several together into a longer poem. For example, you could write a hay(na)ku sonnet, like the one that Vince himself wrote back during NaPoWriMo 2012!” ~ NaPoWriMo, Day 10
I enjoyed writing a hay(na)ku. It required a certain economy of language that I found both challenging and refreshing. As for the subject matter, have you ever had a dream in which you can hear someone crying, only to wake up abruptly and realize your face is wet with tears? This hay(na)ku is kind of about that, but not only.
Poetry from the trenches, Day 10
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Voices
at night–
whose are they?
Someone
is crying.
Someone is asking
why.
Sallow moon,
cracked in half,
where’s
your hatchling?
What fear clawed
its
way out,
what nightmare slipped
naked
and hungry
into the world?
Your moon hatches weird things, brrr… Lovely poem. But I’m now scared… LOL.
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Don’t be—it’s only a poem… or is it?😎😘
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The term “only a poem” doesn’t exist does it? Too ppwerful!
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You’re right. Poems are magic incantations. One must be careful to say the right words the right way. Or else.
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Your writing is quite exquisite.
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Thank you so much!
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You’re most welcome! I noticed that you’d gone to Univ of Minnesota, wondered if you lived there long. I spent 9 years of my childhood there 🙂
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Just three years–2000 to 2003. Loved my time in the Twin Cities.
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Ah!
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Stunningly beautiful, surioara! The moon cracked in half and the nighmare that slipped naked and hungry are magical lines. I am enchanted! Thank you for the inspiration, sweet sister. Love you always ❤️🐝🙏
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Thank you so much, dear soul sister! Thank YOU for the inspiration.🥰 Looking forward to more poeming together!💜
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oh those last three stanzas– wowza!
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Thank you so much, Liz!💜
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Love the ending.
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Thank you, Maria!
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